Hi Mahiya, thanks for participating in the 'Just in Time' English writing project. Your story is very thrilling and you did a very good job to keep the suspense up and running throughout the story and finally end it with a twist. Very inspirational and powerful story. Readers would hurry up to read your story and quickly go to the end to see what eventually happened. There are different ups and downs in the story that kept the uncertainty till the end. Thanks again for writing such a story. Your full writing can be found at this link and we are also attaching a screenshot preview for everyone to see. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FVOcKFNXii7WlKEU3jqxy8orGuW_0vD4T_gAJg8jLP4/edit?usp=sharing