Please complete the sentence 'I Will Change the World by...' and elaborate your answer in the Coolinventor Wiki page. Please write your wiki like a story in narrative... moreI Will Change the World by....
Please complete the sentence 'I Will Change the World by...' and elaborate your answer in the Coolinventor Wiki page. Please write your wiki like a story in narrative format.
Fatima Ahmed: Hi Sazia, thanks for your 'Look Within' wiki article. Overall, it is good! It would be even better if you added a bit more visuals, pictures or references (like your other articles, which were great) Here is your content:
Fatima Ahmed: Hi Sazia, we just finished reading your Alhambra wiki. Thank you! Good formatting with pictures and references. However, please remember that at least 85% of your article needs to be your own original writing. That is very important. Also, it would... moreHi Sazia, we just finished reading your Alhambra wiki. Thank you! Good formatting with pictures and references. However, please remember that at least 85% of your article needs to be your own original writing. That is very important. Also, it would have been better, if you could have elaborated on the topics we asked for in the project rather than give historical facts. Usually longer articles do not carry any extra dollar value. Creatively answering our questions to the point and in a concise manner is what we prefer. Here is your article: less
Fatima Ahmed: Hi Sazia, thanks for writing the 'Retain the Talent' wiki. Overall,it is good in terms of information, writing style, formatting, etc. Good English and article is more than 85% unique. We recommend adding some personal stories or first person narratives... moreHi Sazia, thanks for writing the 'Retain the Talent' wiki. Overall,it is good in terms of information, writing style, formatting, etc. Good English and article is more than 85% unique. We recommend adding some personal stories or first person narratives next time to make it even better. Here is your article:
Fatima Ahmed: Sazia, thanks for participating in our site for the first time and writing the pollution wiki. Writing wiki takes sometimes as you need to know the wiki syntax, so thanks for your hard work in learning this process. Your article has good ideas, but... moreSazia, thanks for participating in our site for the first time and writing the pollution wiki. Writing wiki takes sometimes as you need to know the wiki syntax, so thanks for your hard work in learning this process. Your article has good ideas, but please pay attention to the formatting a bit more as you need a good introduction about yourself. add references also. But other than that, good effort. Here is your article: